Dear life ,
There was a time
You weren’t this rude ,
That you had no such intentions
Towards me to delude
But it all changed
When you opted to obtrude
The cursed moments of yours
Straight to my soul
Stongly wanting to intrude.
Dear life,
I must tell I was broken
As much as my heart,
That there wasn’t any joy left
You had torn it all apart,
But my soul was still intact
Pushing me for a fresh start,
Leaving me wondering
How much creative the almighty is
For making this little art !
Dear life,
Here I am, again,
Staring straight at you ,
To remind you that
Your curse wasn’t all true
That I passed that hurdles,
Now it’s a crystal cLear view
That you made all this possible,
So just , Thank You !
So this is what happens when your troubles beat you down but you strike back with art! Spellbinding❤ and you even managed to make it rhyme while trying to get your message across. Just amazing!
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Thanks a lot twinklingwords !! ( As I’m struggling to find real names of authors on wordpress app !) But I do know that it directly comes from an artist’s heart and this means a lot 👼😃
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Hahaha! Staying anonymous makes blogging more interesting, so hence the popularity I guess! Anyway, yes straight from heart indeed😀
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Agree 🙌 it’s quite interesting when some avid strangers get connected by same thoughts and passion and all appreciation you get is for your creativity and not looks 👌 a little mystery is mysteriously wonderdul ! 😋😀
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Yes so true, exactly! In real life, you mostly can’t ever once let out this side of yours other than creative forums because people often get bored, they’d rather die listening to Yo Yo’s filthy songs than ever once have a meaningful interaction.
Yous got it so right, mysterious is what I was after!
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What a delight it’s been to read your replies !! The same happenes with me when I start talking about poems or books or art movies in my friend circle and that’s why I decided to start my blog. But what follows is that now I want to write more and more and find out how many word and poetry fanatics still exist like you 😃 And what a beautifully crafted blog yours is !!👌👌 Now, trying to match up with that is my #bloggoal2017😋
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But see the thing is I’m not a total of anything, I love writing, art, books and music but it’s not like I want to discuss them or get their exposure all the time but atleast thrice a week I need to a have dose of something or it feels like life is draining out from me.
But I don’t understand people who are superficial most of the time and “deep” conversations only involve things life their love life, boys, girls or ever since ZNMD – travelling. (Lol I might sound mean but this is coming from experience and somwone who always been a very good listener. I was hurt several times because of this, and it’s another reason why I stay shut as a person.)
And I’m so glad and happy to see your enthusiasm, it has inspired me too certainly. And you can achieve more and far better, your writing is just amazing.
Good luck. Phew that was a long comment, sorry about that!
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I’ve read in a book named “Quite” by Susan Cain that introverts are not arrogant or shy or self contained all the times, they are good listeners and only open to the people they trust the most !! And they are not antisocial at all, they just need a particular time to spend alone when they can free their minds to a whole new world of creativity.. you do share many qualities with that saying and so am I and for the sake of that, let these so called extroverts or socialists don’t ruin our brains with their nonsense talks !! Life is so meanful and we just need to explore it to find our unique place .. Now I’ve just made my longest comment so you don’t have to say sorry about that !! Thanks a ton and keep spreading good vibes 😃😄
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Oh yes, I haven’t read that book but I read that excerpt in an Huff Post article. Yes, what she said is so so true❤ it’s so me and of course you too, otherwise you wouldn’t be responding with such enthusiasm.
Yes, you’re so right, we need to explore it in our own ways, perhaps we’re already doing that.
Same to you on vibes, have a great day!😀
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I like the rhyme scheme 👍👍
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Thank you bhai 🙂
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The poem has something about it that everyone can relate to it , everyone who was strong enough to stand up 8 times when life out them down 7 times.
Lovely works read them today.
Best wishes for your future posts❤😃
– Samridhi Dutta
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Thank you so much samridhi for your kind words.. 😃
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great poem
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Thank you Ben 😃
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Such great words! Life is all about rising up when you had no will to. At the end, the one who doesn’t give up wins. Beautiful thoughts, Mihir.
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Thanks a lot Jahnavi 😄
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Hey Mihir! Sorry to disturb but can you recommend me a few books to solve for extra practice? I am a bit confused.
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Actually I hadn’t given NEET as an entrance as GUJCET was compulsory for us at that time !! And for that, I had only revised my state government books !
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You are a Gujarati?!
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Yup.. a Patel 😎 I guess you are too..don’t you ??!
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Yes. Even I am a Gujarati 🙈
This is so awesome.
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Haha..Two gujjus at the same place.. Aapde to WordPress ne pan moj karavi daishu ! 😉 And yes, you can email me for any help in future through my contact page.. I would like to hear from you 😃
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Surely Mihir. I will. 😄
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P.S Can you just send me your email id here?
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Of course .. tradamihir21@gmail.com
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Mine is jahnaviddesai@yahoo.com just in case 😂
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Yes..would surely like to have conversation with a medical enthusiast 👍😀
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Of course! I have so many questions to ask you!
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Do check your mailbox everyday! 😂
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Don’t worry.. I have that habit of checking mailbox two times a day 😜
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Kem chho Mihir bhai? 😊
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Majama 😂
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I’ll not say much but just ”beautiful”
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Thank you bro. Saurabh 😀
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