It was mesmerising to witness
That born affection in her pearly eyes
As if I had uttered a lasting spell
Gently pushing her to twirl in a dreamy sky
Some simple similes and a few rhymes
That had made her stilled shadow swing
For me that was the very moment
I knew that poetry was indeed my thing !!
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That was mine , what is yours !? 😋
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Thank you bro. 😃
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My God!! so damn beautiful😄 I’m glad you understood your calling for poetry definitely is your thing❤
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Yeah, thank you and thank god it happened before my graduation .. it changed me from introvert to ambivert as I’ve started performing open mics and damn that attention you get after that 😍😍 I always thank almighty for giving this blessing ! And you should too coz it’s also your thing !😃
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I’m so glad it did and wow that’s amazing you do open mics! I would never have the courage to that I guess. Hahaha getting attention for your talent is the best feeling😁😁 Yes I thank the Almighty too for all this as much I can. Thank you for your kind words.
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I must recommend you to do open mics .. I was literally shivering while my introduction and speaking all the opposite of what I planned but as I cracked a joke unintentionally and audience laughed .. it gave me that courage to finish my poem but what follows afterwards makes a permanent mark on your personality.. Try once😄
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Lol I just lived your entire experience through your words! 😄Anyway, thanks for the encouragement, will try I guess!
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Definitely it’s your thing ,and thanks that you realized it on time otherwise we could have missed your beautiful creations.By the way guide me with this open mic thing .
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I mean how do you get the opportunity n all.
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First ..a hearthful thanks 😃 And second.. that open mic was in my city vadodara held by “imlijimli” .. you can find it on facebook page of same name ..So they were finding new poets and my friends sent me online application form as they knew I love to write but problem was that I never had written a poem before that so when I first heard , I ignored that but something inside me was against that decision and I don’t know how but one morning , I sat in solitude thinking about all of that and suddenly I said to me ,” I have to do it ..I don’t want to be average .. I am not fit for one personality.” And bang , after a half an hour and few edits..I had my first motivational poem in my hand..And then as described on previous comment , I sent it to organizers and it got selected in top 10 and rest is who I am now !! I can’t thank god enough for that morning.. 🙂 And then I did the same in my hometown surat and then I became a performer who a few months back was a complete shy and introverted guy 😄
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That’s really cool :).Let me know if something comes up like this around delhi region .
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Sure 🙂👍
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perfect!
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Thank you 😄
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it’s awesome!!! yeah definitely poetry is your thing 🙂
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Glad you stopped by to read my poems .. Thank you so much Pankhudi ( Or I should say .. Khushi !) 😄
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Khushi wud be better too 🙂 u welcome 🙂
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